Thursday, March 23, 2006

A small excerpt from "Taken by Storm"

I wanted to get everyone another taste of my first IR romance that will soon be released by Ocean's Mist Press called "Taken by Storm.

Please let me know what you think.

Taken by Storm

Shaking off his grip, she took a step back toward the open doorway. She wasn’t going to let Storm force her into doing something that she wasn’t ready to admit to yet. “No, I’m keeping my date with Brian. I thought about him a lot last night and I don’t think I’m giving him a fair chance. So I’m going to spend as much time as I can with him while I’m here.”
“Who knows,” she shrugged. “Maybe April is right and we’ll be related before you know it.”
Syleena waited for Storm to blow up, but instead he just stood by the edge of the table and stared at her. There was almost an eerie calmness to his face and eyes. She wrapped her arms around her body at the sudden chill in the room.
“Don’t do it Syleena,” Storm threatened. “I’ll let you us Brian as shield a little longer, but don’t ever think you’ll walk down the aisle with him.”
“I’m not your sister. You can’t give me orders and expected me to obey them. I may be a guest in your house, but that doesn’t make you my keeper.” Syleena snapped. She ran out of the room upstairs to her bedroom.
“Oh, I don’t want to be your keeper Syleena and you’ll figure that out soon enough.” Storm muttered.

Copyrighted 2006
Marie Rochelle
Soon to be released from
Ocean's Mist Press

6 comments:

Isabella Jordan said...

Wow, this sounds like a great story. Can't wait to read it. =)

Writerdiva said...

Isabella,

Thank you for compliment. I can't wait until it released either.

Please come and post again.

Marie Rochelle

KolbyIrish said...

I cannot wait for this to come out. I will be giving you a great review

Writerdiva said...

Thank you KolbyIrish! I can't wait until it comes out either! It was so much fun to write. Storm Hyde is so sexy!

cinquetta allen said...

Oh know you didn't it!! Just give us a taste. That's like giving a thirst man a teaspoon of cold water. Ohhh girl that's cold!! just two parargraphs. You know it could been longer but what I had read so far is good. I love it!!! When is the release date ohgod I hope real soon.

Writerdiva said...

Cinquetta,

Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm so happy that everyone is enjoying the excerpts from "Taken by Storm."

I haven't gotten the revisions back from Ocean's Mist Press yet, so I'm not quite sure about the release date.

But as soon as I find out I'll post it here in my blog.

Cinquetta,

If you go back to my previous post I think it's December 2005, you can read a longer excerpt about Storm and Syleena.

They are such a hot couple.

Thanks again for visiting my blog and feel free to ask me any questions you might have.

Marie Rochelle