I loved the story of Headley and Troy and can not wait for the story of Fancy. I want to find out the mystery surrounding her. The only thing I can complain about is the editing. I have read all your books published so far and never had a complaint about editing. As I was reading I felt like maybe you were in a hurry and the draft was accidently published. Normally I do not have editing problems with your stories. This story had glaring problems in the beginning that almost distracted me from the story. Other then those objections the story was very good and I can not wait for the other publications of your stories. Please keep up the good work.
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I loved the story of Headley and Troy and can not wait for the story of Fancy. I want to find out the mystery surrounding her.
The only thing I can complain about is the editing. I have read all your books published so far and never had a complaint about editing. As I was reading I felt like maybe you were in a hurry and the draft was accidently published. Normally I do not have editing problems with your stories. This story had glaring problems in the beginning that almost distracted me from the story. Other then those objections the story was very good and I can not wait for the other publications of your stories. Please keep up the good work.
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